Score: 7

"Not bad"

submission: Rushing Stars

date: January 3, 2006

First it was a great idea for a flash nice job. Not my favorite of your work you have yet to match your past work. Some things that I would like to talk to you about first off is your character drawings. They're really lacking I know drawings on a flash is harder than on a piece of paper, but there isn't much you can do unless you want to buy all this hardware, but enough about that I'm getting off track here. Some of the things could have been drawn better like the drill, and the high speed event when he was flying through space. Other than that I think it was a clever idea. One thing that doesn't fit well with reality, well first you could never turn earth into a car, but when the earth dodged a meteor a car rose up then crashed back down and blew up. Now that would never happen do to the a thing I like to call "gravity", but it's your flash not mine so. It basically is what would happen if the world was going to end people would start to get scared and there would be an old guy holding a sigh say "repent" hey my names repent nice. I lost my thought so I'm going to wrap this up with a thumbs up and can't wait to see what else you got for me to enjoy.

Score: 7

"Well it's not like it hasn't been done before."

submission: NG 1337 Translator!

date: November 23, 2005

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Score: 8

"Very Good"

submission: Sober

date: November 14, 2005

Well I must say one of the best Music Videos I've seen in awhile. I really did like your timing in the song and along with some other things, and of coures there is always somewhere you messed up on. First off your animation were terrific prima I must say. The only thing I think you need to work on and I think you see it too when you show the world and cracks forming or something like that. As the world turned the ctacks stayed in one place so you need to check that out and fix that little bit. Sound was not bad you could have used just a tiny bit a misc sound little sound affects that went along with the song as a rythme or something. Good song choice I wish you would do more of these music videos they're very good. Now your character movment had a few flaws like when he was pulling down the lever you messed up there his hand was kind of missplaced on the bar. The guitar placment with the hands still a bit off really I don't know how you can play guitar with only three fingers, but ok you just need to move the wrist up a bit you had it looking like he had his wrist broken because really guitar players don't normally put their wrist that for unless they need to do certain chords, but most of them. Well I think you could do better and I hope you do and I would like to see more of your work and it will be a pleaser reviewing it. I hope to see another Insomnia Music Video.

Score: 7

"Tush people"

submission: Name That Riff XVII

date: October 13, 2005

People it's Tush as in ass not touch.
I'm looking for touch come one people.

Score: 7

"Dude"

submission: Name That Riff VI

date: October 13, 2005

Come on people it's smoking jesus learn your music