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DAK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Fianl you have submited something. Pretty good I must say. The glove was a little wierd though the shading was off, but other than that I didn't see what else was wrong with it. I would like to see you make another flash make it longer too.

drDAK responds:

Thanks -repent-. =D
I felt kind of awkward drawing the glove, perhaps it wasn't that. It was zipping by at a pretty good speed so you hadn't time to critique it so much.

[Rammstein - Dalai Lama]

Nice

It's about time someone did a flash on Rammstein that didn't suck in animations. Well for those who don't know what they are saying I will tranlsate it for you *hint I speak german.
An airplane is in the evening wind
On board is a man with his child as well
They sit secure and warm
and so they fall into the trap of sleep
In three hours they will be there
for mama's birthday [2]
The view is good the sky is clear

Onwards, onwards into destruction
We must live until we die
Humans don't belong in the sky
So the lord in Heaven calls
his sons to the wind
Bring me this human child

The child has still lost time
Then an echo jumps to his ears
A muffled rumbling drives the night
and the driver of the clouds laughs
He shakes the human cargo awake

Onwards, onwards into destruction
We must live until we die
And the child says to the father
Don't you hear the thunder
That's the king of all the winds
He wants me to become his child

From the clouds falls a choir
which crawls into the little ear
Come here, stay here
We'll be good to you
Come here, stay here
We are your brothers

The storm embraces the flying machine
The pressure falls quickly in the cabin
A muffled rumbling drives the night
In panic the human cargo screams

Onwards, onwards into destruction
We must live until we die
And to God the child pleads
Heaven take back the wind
Bring us unharmed to earth

From the clouds falls a choir
which crawls into the little ear
Come here, stay here
We'll be good to you
Come here, stay here
We are your brothers

The father is now holding onto the child
and has pressed it tightly against himself
He doesn't notice its difficulty in breathing
But fear knows no mercy
So with his arms the father
squeezes the soul from the child
Which takes its place upon the wind and sings:

Come here, stay here
We'll be good to you
Come here, stay here
We are your brothers

[Secret Mansion 2]

Nice

I was waiting for you to make another secret mansion. This is much better than all of your other work. The character drawings still lack a little, also you went overboard on that fisrt creature in the mansion scene. The sound effects were ok, but the character voices didn't seem very good the quality was just wierd. I cain't wait to see what else you will intertain me with next time keep it up.

AligatorHead responds:

watch it again, i fixed the audio.

[Response 2]

Nice

This one was much better than your first episode. I liked the review itself and how you responded to it. You still need to work on the pause at the end of the review. I liked the humor you had in the review about the clip. I would like to see you make more resonse episodes to rag on more people.

[Leader of man]

Well....

Well it was just lacking something. The sound quality wasn't bad, but you could still hear some scratches in the mic. The character drawings were ok, but you still need to work on your robot drawing. The one thing you should do is make that one guys face brighter when he talks. You really need to put more into this I mean it was only talking all the way through even though some of it was funny it just isn't a kind of flash that most people want to watch.

[a response]

Good

Yes I can see how some people are simple minded enough to only want what the media tells them what they want. I thought the characters wee very well drawn although you could put a little more detail on the robot. The idea has been done before, but not like this. The sound quality was good, I liked the english voice. One thing I didn't like about this was the long pause after he has read the review, and the drawing of the blast from the cannon. I would try and work on that to get the full ten.

[White ep1]

Nice

Yes I really enjoyed this flash. Question though if this is episode one then why did he kill himself, I mean how is there going to be a chapter two? Ok the writing was very good although you took to long on it. The part about the mirror was very nice. I would really like to see you make more of these flashes they are aweseome.

Frogcloset responds:

it going to show the afterlife

[A Sad Swim.]

Needs work

Well the flash style that you were going for was great. But I would work in the circle drawing a little bit. The animations were pretty good I like what you did with the text of wind. The music choice wasn't bad, it fit the flash style. I would say it is too simple minded for some people on NG so.

[Crono's Party]

Nice

Anothr awesome Chrono sprite flash. I wish you would have put a picture on the text to let the people know who is talking. The stro-line was ok but not that good. I would like to see put more time into your work.

Yoshiking2 responds:

I started doing that in my previous submission but I couldn't do it in this movie because some of the Mugs(Pictures) I would have used was not here. so sry about that.
I didn't have 2 much time either. IT was a contest everything has a deal line.

[The Robot's Obligations]

Ok

Well it wasn't very funny but a good idea. I think you went in the wrong direction with this flash. It was meant for humor I believe but it wasn't really. The sound quality was pretty bad you should fix that. Good spanish though.