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[Chillin]

Not bad

Well not as good as some of your other work but still good. The character animations was sloppy when it comes to walking but other than that it was good. The character drawings wern'y very good except the girl on the bench and the main guy standing next to the screen. I didn't like your voice quality I would say you should work on that a little more.

AligatorHead responds:

this is old school, i hope you konw that.

[Auf Achse]

Nice

I am begining to like your work. Your work has such meaning keep it up. Although it still has no voices in it the music choice was very good it fit the situation. I liked the animations, a little sloppy at sometimes but still good. The character drawings were ok just not much detail on them. I am really enjoying your flashes I will review all of your work.

AligatorHead responds:

lol, "review all my worK"haha.

[One Wish]

Touching

This was a very touching story. Although it's kind of impposible for a person who is in middle schoold and hasn't walked ever to just get up and walk it was still a good story. The animations of the characters were great as was the character drawings. I would suggest you put sound in your flash, instead of text. I wish we had girls like that at my school because no one has any care for anyone these days and it is just disgusting of our generation are going to turn out. But any way it was a good flash and I would like to see you continue your flash making.

AligatorHead responds:

i want to animate the impossible becuase you cant see it in life. thus making it neverbefore seen.

[Taliphone]

Nice

This flash was well thought out. A very good idea in the first place. The animations was great as was the character drawings. I liked that you used the accents of the character voices. I like what you meant about the answering machine to take the collectors calls very good. That's basically what it's like with the telemarketors these days.

[Little Fighter Alpha Ch.7]

Best Chapter Yet

The best chapter yet keep it going. I like what you did with the screen shot at the title page. The part I didn't like was when i just cut off and then went to a different part of the battlefield don't do that next time. The music was a good touch to add to the scene. I keep forgetting to mention this but your character text is really good effect. I would like to see y'all keep this up do not stop at chapter seven please.

[Little Fighter Alpha Ch.6]

Yes

I am really getting into this series man. I really like the progress you guys are having keep it up. Good choice of music I might add perfect timing in switching songs. The animations is getting a lot better than it used to be I do like what you do at the end but at least give us a an idea of what happened in each window instead of giving them their own chapter. But hey it's your choice not mine.

[Little Fighter Alpha Ch.5]

Kind of short

Nice chapter it was full of action but it was too short. I really like the fact that you do a close up on the two characters Ilike that. Most people don't do a lose up on a sprite like that. I don't get the thing with the bats though I guess I'll find out later. Well good job and I hope you keep going with this.

[Little Fighter Alpha Ch.4]

Nice

Its just keeps betting better and better. I am really enjoying this flash series you need to kep making them Max. Ok the animations were even better due to the sound of the punches and stuff. The sound effects you added made it more believable in your fighting. I liked what you did with the title screen it is way more structured thanlast time you need to keep this up.

[Little Fighter Alpha Ch.3]

Much better

This chapter is way better than one and two. This has more structure to it. You don't have to click the button to go to the next scene. They keep walking and do not stop like last time that's good. I see the music has stayed one tone all the way through that is very good I liked it. This is way more enjoyable now than it used to be good job.

[Little Fighter Alpha Ch.2]

Good

Another good job. One thing I will point out is the music. Now the musicis ok but you need to keep it to a mininmium of three songs for the whole flash. You have too many songs playing into one another, I mean I hear one song then it cutts off into a different song. You need to take care of that. Other than I this was the same as last time very good, but shorter.