repenter's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Super Mario Tribute!!]

OMG

OMGOMGOMG. Well to be serious it was a very good flash. The animation was top nocht sound was great. You were very mean to tace sprite though and I am a shemed of you. Is bloo's Mario Red game basicaly the third to the last pipe? It looks almost the same just a higher quality sprite and buttons? Well really there isn't much to review on this since it was so dam funnnnnnnyyyieiieieieiey Well I can't wait for the next mario tribute or a megaman tribute or metal slug or any other tribute that yall think of.

JordanKinsley responds:

Thanks for the Review this is the best review yet! thanks for reviewing!

[Moto Kabalt]

Good

This is the first flash you submitted all by yourself. I guess you're a big boy now yes you are yes you are.

Good like always why do I even review your stuff it's always good......well except for the Dialoge you could fix that. Music fit the scene animation good although the fight scene with his stats 9999999999999999999999999999999999999999 was kind of dumb, but hey its yours I can't say anything about it.

Tootbook responds:

I have no idea who you used to be

[Nature]

Too short

This seems shorter than the clock flash. One thing I didn't like was the butterfly not colered. But everything else was ok. I still think something with that kind of message deserves a longer flash. I would like to see you continue with your flash making and hopfully get better at it and make an awesome flash.

drDAK responds:

The focus of the butterfly was not to be colored, so it stuck out.

[Colonel Clock]

???

Dak what's wrong? That animations was way off. And a bit short for a clock flash. I hope you don't make another clock flash.

drDAK responds:

Twas terrible, mind you, I hated that flash.

[Me Talking to Myself]

Very Nice

I liked this a lot it had a lot of meaning to it. The animations was fair. I like the aproach you went for on the drawings styles, but I don't feel you achieved it on the characters I don't know, but there was something missing. Well anyway the plot was very good althought doesn't fit the title very good and powerful.
Where is that Rushing Star you were talking about? I can't wait.
I hope to see you continue your flash making and I can't wait to review them.

Dasneviano responds:

Eeeeee! Thanks a lot!! Even though this is my flash that more people liked and said good thigs about, and bookmarked and everything, I haven't been able to watch it again since the day I uploaded it! I know what you mean when you said I didn't achieve it, i feel it too.
Rushing Stars is like 90% done!! Should be ready by he end of next month!! :D

[FF:The New Empire Part 3]

A bit different

Well it isn't like you other flashes. I didn't like what you did with the dialoge box, I like them strechted across the top not boxed, it make it looks wierd. Animations is about the same a bit daring on the close up, but hey there isn't much you can do with sprites on close ups. Music is fine. One thing I really didn't like was the fight scene where you did everything seperate to were to had to click on them to see the fight. Next time just have a skip button.

Tootbook responds:

alrighty! thanks repent :p.

[Round Vegetables]

Simple

A very simple flash I like that. I liked the character drawing in this one, I also loved what you did with the border althought it could be a bit bigger. The animations was good not sure in music choice I mean it was funny red neck music, but a bit too red necky if you know what I mean too nuch banjo in it. I would like to see you create more works of art, so when is your next piece comming out? If you ever need a script writer be sure to give me an email on what you need. Till next time I give you thanks and best of luck on your next piece of work. Thank You

Dasneviano responds:

Wow!! Thanks a lot for the sweet words, they really mean a lot to me!!My next piece is coming out soon, it's called rushing stars and is almost finished! Ill send u an email to make sure you dont miss it!! The more publicity it gets...
Thanks a lot one more time and keep boosting other people self steem!!

[Transformers: S T I D]

Needs work

Well it needs some work and a little more detail. You need to take mug shot of the character and put it with the dialogw when they are speaking. Work on your character drawings a little bit, and please try and make it longer. Not bad though not bad just work on it a little more. Lay it out and have someone check it.

amit-patel responds:

i had my mates check it. maybe i just have a different sense of humor.

thanx anyway!

[-Level 10-]

DAK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Fianl you have submited something. Pretty good I must say. The glove was a little wierd though the shading was off, but other than that I didn't see what else was wrong with it. I would like to see you make another flash make it longer too.

drDAK responds:

Thanks -repent-. =D
I felt kind of awkward drawing the glove, perhaps it wasn't that. It was zipping by at a pretty good speed so you hadn't time to critique it so much.

[Secret Mansion 2]

Nice

I was waiting for you to make another secret mansion. This is much better than all of your other work. The character drawings still lack a little, also you went overboard on that fisrt creature in the mansion scene. The sound effects were ok, but the character voices didn't seem very good the quality was just wierd. I cain't wait to see what else you will intertain me with next time keep it up.

AligatorHead responds:

watch it again, i fixed the audio.