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[The Life Of Marco Polo]

Why

Why did you cut this short? Your character drawings are slacking you really need to work on them. The animations is the same very good. The sound quality of the guys voice was ok. The accent could be better. The contrast you need to work on it's too dark at some points of your flashes for me to see anything.

AligatorHead responds:

...original document was a .AVI file or .WMV, originaly 11 minutes long, Email me and i send you the 90 mb . wmv file. or AIM me up.

that is why.

[Secret Mansion]

Nice

This has a little bit more structure than your others but still lacks a little. You really need to work on your pre-loader. And if you are going to do a scene selestion thing why not make a title page instead of making a scene selection page. Like have the title page and have links to the credits to your web stuff like that. The animations were great as was the character drawings. The voices were ok but not as good as I think they should be.

AligatorHead responds:

k

[One Wish Remastered]

Much Better

I like this version better due to the the sound. I think you should work a little bit on your sound effects you got the voices mastered now you just have to get the sound effects in your work. Everything else is the same but I think this hits more to homebase because of the sound. When you have to read it takes away a part of the message.

AligatorHead responds:

yes

[Mister Clown Head]

Nice Work

This had a whole lot better animations than your other work that I've seen. I see what your views are about smoking and I feel the same way about it. Too short for me I would say stretch it out a bit. Very good sound quality on your voices keep that up. I would like to see you submit more just make them longer than this one. Also you need to work on your pre-loaders, they are kind of sloppy.

AligatorHead responds:

lol

[Fishing Lives]

Good

A very good idea on your opion of smoking. Although kind of short it still sends a message. The animations was pretty good. The character drawings were good also. The music choice I'm not to sure about. You couls have done a different song than that one. Well not one of your better flashes but you still have a more powerfull message than others.

AligatorHead responds:

this was boring.

[Chillin]

Not bad

Well not as good as some of your other work but still good. The character animations was sloppy when it comes to walking but other than that it was good. The character drawings wern'y very good except the girl on the bench and the main guy standing next to the screen. I didn't like your voice quality I would say you should work on that a little more.

AligatorHead responds:

this is old school, i hope you konw that.

[Auf Achse]

Nice

I am begining to like your work. Your work has such meaning keep it up. Although it still has no voices in it the music choice was very good it fit the situation. I liked the animations, a little sloppy at sometimes but still good. The character drawings were ok just not much detail on them. I am really enjoying your flashes I will review all of your work.

AligatorHead responds:

lol, "review all my worK"haha.

[One Wish]

Touching

This was a very touching story. Although it's kind of impposible for a person who is in middle schoold and hasn't walked ever to just get up and walk it was still a good story. The animations of the characters were great as was the character drawings. I would suggest you put sound in your flash, instead of text. I wish we had girls like that at my school because no one has any care for anyone these days and it is just disgusting of our generation are going to turn out. But any way it was a good flash and I would like to see you continue your flash making.

AligatorHead responds:

i want to animate the impossible becuase you cant see it in life. thus making it neverbefore seen.

[~No Name]

Nice Work

This was a very entertaining little flash. I liked what you did with the japanese (Ithink I spelled it wrong) style animations that was great. The randomness of the fighters was perplexing, just people coming back and forth all over the place it was great. The test I will say was ok but you just took it over board on some of it. Well I would like to see what else you could come uo with, I hope you use the same style animations.

matt-likes-swords responds:

I will, thanks.

[Plans to Fuck Alexis 12]

Nice

Another plan to episode how do you guy keep coming up with ideas? I would like to see y'all come up with more but I don't this will last very long y'all have almost done everything. Any way about the flash. The animations of the character has gotten way better than before. The character drawings has changed a bunch it's way better than when you first started. The voices of the narrator is too slow in my opion I like to tone of voice just not the speed of it.

Ryan-Smith responds:

thats the way he talks, i dont think its slow.