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[Star Wars Aftermath]

Nice

Hello dave woooot it's your flash I'm reviewing it yes. Ok I will say that the animations of the characters were good and the draing were good except the big fat guy. I would like to see a better drawing for him. I didn't like some of the voices for yoda and the goblin guy but the others voices were just fine. I really did like the humor in it. Most people don't see star wars to be a funny thing but it is just look at the people.

MeatwadSprite responds:

thanx dog

[Shades of Grey Ep. 4]

Nice

I would like to see this series to keep going. What happened I havn't seen this in awhile. It was still good any way. Well one thing I don't like about it is that I can't give you anything to work on or any ideas. So be happy about that. The animations and character drawings are good. As the sound effects also the music was good but would have been my choice.

SirGaryColeman responds:

Thanks. And I'm guessing you meant to give me higher than a Zero, but messed up... oh well. :P

[...::: Kill Kenny :::...]

Decent

I have a big problem with this one. First off you didn't even animate kenny you just took clips from the show and pasted it here that isn't very good. Another thing was the odjects you used were poorly drawn and the blood doesn't floe that much on the show you added it and it doesn't even match the color as on the show. That's how I can tell it wa just clips because the poor drawings of the odjects and the blood. Other than that I would say it's good enough to be on the south park parody page.

Buzoniasty responds:

I didn't took clips from show i make it in flash with SP tutorial on NG!

[MTV 4 News]

Yeah another one

As I said before this flash is great I would like for ou to keep it coming. I do have one question though, why did you change the colors of the character? I would like to see you make an episode on a michael jackson thing. I would be cool since he had to go to court not to long ago. It's up to you but I would like to see you do it. I would like to help you make the flash but I wouldn't know what you would need me to do. I'm a big fan of the MTV New and I would like to help in some way.

beaton responds:

I don't know what you could do. I'm very lazy and impatient, so I always get my flashes done within a two or three day radius. Do you have any experience with flash anyways? I know I don't, and am amazed I've gotten this far.

And I don't think I'm gonna do something on Michael Jackson. For the past two years he's been the victim of countless internet cartoons, SNL, Mad MTV and whatnot, and there's not much left to say about him that would be original. I did just include a picture of Michael dangling blanket out the window with McCauley's head pasted over it. But maybe you missed that or maybe that's why you're bringing up Jacko.

And which character are you talking about? Mr. Assface? I figured I change his suits colors for a little change. I never see real anchormen wearing the same suits, so what the hell.

[Paper Mario: Breakdance]

Awesome

I am a big fan of the paper mario I was waiting for someone to make a paper mario keep it up man. The animations are as good as you can get the if they are two dimension paper so I had to give you a ten on that. I love your choice in music I just had to watch five times just to listen to the music. The idea for a break dance contest must have been difficult due to the fact that they are paper I wonder how you even came up with that idea for it. This flash was just so funny seing a two dimension mario and bowser trying to break dance, but they were pretty good any way. I would like to see you make more paper marios flashes I would try make a game for paper mario. I would like to see what else you come up with for paper mario. One thing I must point out is the mushroom poster with dance atop his head. It's poorly drawn you need to just get a actual pic from mario and replacs it because it was just so messed up.

GrimJuju responds:

funny thing, i thaught about making a paper mario movie because there were none in the collections. (that i could find)

["Humpers 2"]

Funny

I thought this ws very funny I was really entertained mainly by the music. I know that song and I find that song very funny the reason why I gave you a good score was because of that song I havn't heard it in awhile so it made me laugh even harder. One thing you should definatly work on is you animations and character drawings I mean they arn't bad but they arn't great either. Once you fix that problem I would say keep running with this little bit, but I know you will run out of songs. Your are going to run out of songs to play and odjects and people to hump. Well I would like to see improvments in your flashes and I hope to see more work here on NG keep it up.

SkaterFTF2 responds:

LoL. I will never run out of songs and material! Maybe I will. Oh well.

[KYROG3NiC]

Good

I havn't been a big fan of the stick slaughter but now I guess it's ok. But I have to say that it was stick death that started it all so you are basically 2nd rate stick flash makers. What I still don't like about these flashes from y'all is they're too random for me I mean have some structure make a flash that doesn't have just complete fighting throw a story line in there or something. That really just isn't proffesinal like that I mean if you want to have front page flashes you need to make the sticks bigger and make a flash with an actual purpose. But other than that your stuff is pretty good other that one thing, you really need o work on it. Well I would like to see some improvement from y'all and keep it up and I can't wait to see what y'all have next.

Sk1tz responds:

Meh, stick figure animations these days are pretty much always random, but I do agree. Except nobody want to see my cinematic stick. NOBODY :P.

[The Rabbitatrix:Chapter 1]

Nice

I liked this little flash it was very entertaining but a little too short. I really like the animations of the characters but not so much the drawings of some of them I would work on that. What I really like was the begining with the gun and sword were you drew it then it started the color that was very good. I would like to see what happens next. One more comment please your doing a parody of the martix so try and use proper grammer none of that pwn stuff. Well I thought it was good and I can't wait to see what happens next and keep it up.

OddRabbit responds:

thank you man! I appreciete it i worked really hard on it and your the first one to gimme a good review. I'll take ur comments serriously and it wasn't so much a porody, it was like a take off or sumthing i don't know what to call it. If you want to know what happens next I can tell you on AIM my sn is Senore Frylock

[Plans to Fuck Alexis 11]

Good

I have seen a lot of improvment in you animations it used to be pretty bad but now its is very good. I can't believe y'all still have ideas for this thing if it were me I would have came out with four episodes and I would have been out of ideas but y'all are good. I know it's small but I would say work on your drawings of your character and odjects mainly the guns. But other than that I didn't see what other flaws in your flash I hope you still have ideas left. When ever you run out of them then I hope that this isn't the line for you I think you should make a new series with a different gimic something with a little more something I don't know. Well I'm glad to see that you are still have this going and I hope you keep helping NG with the flashes.

Ryan-Smith responds:

refresque las gracias, yo aman ver cuando la gente piensa que soy mejor ahora

[Something Shines]

Good

I really liked this it had its owns style. But I think the drawings were a little too messed up, you see there is a line of a good drawing and a poor drawing but its still cool at the same time and I don't know how that works. Any way the animations of the flash was good and the idea was pretty good. Although I didn't get why he was in the desert I can't seem to think why you put him there I guess since he is prisoned. The ball on the chain thing was ok the sounde effect could have better suited the movment of the character but its was still ok. I would have liked the flash to be an adventure rather than a short but hey what can you do if you didn't make it. Any way I would like to see more of your work on NG and keep up the good work and please work on the drawing a little bit maybe get a friend to help you on that.

Dasneviano responds:

Thanks sir! Yeah, I'll work on the drawings and everything else. You're one of the people I'd like to watch my next movie, still unstarted. I think you'd understand it (most people here only care about video game and violence). I appreciate your words!
"nothing left except eternal darkness", indeed!!