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[STD: Wave 1]

Good

The title was very miss leading I think you should change it. I don't many people want to play an STD game I suggest to change it to prison break or something. The animations of the prisoners were good not like others. One thing I don't like is when you arn't shooting it lags and even when your shooting it lags you need to fix the crousor for it lags too much to were I can't get all the people I need to get. I would throw in some speed metal to really get the people into it. The speed metal would fit the situation and it's awesome music. I like that you locked the levels, it's like an arcade game to where you have to play the whole thing very creative on your part. I would say you should make a level with a couple of guys that got their hands on some guns and amunitions and have a level where you actualy have a life bar instead of you have no worries other than kill people that can't shoot you back. Or you should make a game totally reverse to it. You are the convict and you have to kill the cops inorder to get out that would be much more interesting and harder since you can die. Well that's all I think of for you to fix or idea to try. I would like to see more of your work here on NG.

[Metroid Defenders]

It has been done

I don't see the need for people to make the same type of game over and over again. This style of game has been made ten times already try something different. The only thing that you did different was the character it's supposed to be a ship not a megaman or something I couldn't tell what it was it just looked like sprite to me. The music doesn't re-start when you puch replay it overlaps you really need to fix that. One thin I will give you is that if this ws your first try it was very good at that. But it reallt lost my vote that it has already been done nex time try inventing a whole new games or flash or copy something that hasn't been done much like a parody of the rugrats or just anything. I would like to see improvmnt in your work on NG and keep it up you'll get better.

[The Crusher]

Ok

I thoguht that this was ok but I know I have seen it somewhere before, the idea any way not the game itself. Don't worry about that but I think the review infront of me is right you got the idea from Kids in the Hall. I remmember the commercial for it "I'm crushing head" I believe he said. Any way it doesn't matter were you got the idea from it's about the game. Now the animations I would say are average and the characters wern't very well drawn. I would work on those two things right there before you submit another game or flash. Other than that I didn't see anything wrong with it. Except I did hear some absence of music, come on at least put a little jingle loop in it, it isn't hard or anything. After that I wouldn't say there would be any other thing wrong with it good job. I wish to see some improvment with your games and flashes and good job.

[Astral Schism]

Good

I can tell that this has been well thought out. For one it isn't like most of the space shooting games. I would have to say it has a little more something to it but I still didn' like that it has already been done before. I could say that you need more color but since it's a space game I guess I can't say that. I'm really having trouble trying to figure out something to fix, thats a good thing for you because I would rag on you for that. Well I guess you could make more levels and put the shoot button in some other place not the Ctrl don't use that most people don't like that change it to space and put pause as shift or something. Other than those things I would have to say good job and keep it up. Well I hope to see more of your work here on NG and till next time.

[FlashChat (IRC)]

Ok

I find it very intertaining with this one. Although I see some of your reviews some people have trouble loging in well you need to change something to let them know how to do it. Since there was no sound nor anything else for that matter I can't see what to point out that was wrong. I would say make it more intresting like change the skim colors or something but I didn't see the need for it. Well I hope you are coming up with another idea on how to entertain all these NG fans and I wish to see more of your work here on NG. Just change somethings around so the people who don't know how to log in, to tell them how to do so and it would be perfect.

[The Legend of Timmy]

It was ok

I didn't seea nything wrong with it nor anything to improve on. So I guess all I can say is great job at the game and I hope to see more of your work here on NG. Think of something else other than timmy, I'm sick of people using the name timmy for everything but thats off the subject.

All in all I liked it and thanks for passing the time.

[BR III: Gemini]

I can't see

Even though I just rated the other one this one seems better but I can't see where the walls. I know no one actualy played it so you will get it any way but you need to fix that.

Like my last review this is what I wanted with the creativity.

I hope you fix it and can't wait till your next game/flash

Heres a tip don't submit both of the games back to back you could have atleast waited for an hour or two.

jmtb02 responds:

The walls are there... I am not seeing the problem... if you are running flash 6, that could be a problem.

--jmtb02

[BR III: Andromeda]

Very Good

This game was very good. I kept losing and losing but I kept playing its very addictive. Although a very simple game its kind of hard because the ball moves too fast if you hold it even for two seconds it just shoots up.Thats was the only defect in this game, but you could be a little more creative with the levels and the ball.

I hope to see more of your flash/games here on NG keep it up.