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Good

I really liked this it had its owns style. But I think the drawings were a little too messed up, you see there is a line of a good drawing and a poor drawing but its still cool at the same time and I don't know how that works. Any way the animations of the flash was good and the idea was pretty good. Although I didn't get why he was in the desert I can't seem to think why you put him there I guess since he is prisoned. The ball on the chain thing was ok the sounde effect could have better suited the movment of the character but its was still ok. I would have liked the flash to be an adventure rather than a short but hey what can you do if you didn't make it. Any way I would like to see more of your work on NG and keep up the good work and please work on the drawing a little bit maybe get a friend to help you on that.

Dasneviano responds:

Thanks sir! Yeah, I'll work on the drawings and everything else. You're one of the people I'd like to watch my next movie, still unstarted. I think you'd understand it (most people here only care about video game and violence). I appreciate your words!
"nothing left except eternal darkness", indeed!!

Short

Firsr off I didn't like the fact that it was based on a clock flash. Also it was way to short and pointless next time make it a whole lot longer. The idea could have been good but the dumb crab thing just isn't it. Try a little harder on your ideas and thats it. The animations ws the only reason why I voted for its protection. The sound wasn't even from you or anyone that helped you make it, it was a clip and thats not very good. I would say do your own voices, but the sound effect of the projector and the screen was good that was the only sound bit that wasn't bad. Please next week isn't anal don't do that. I would like to see more of your work here as long as it isn't some kind of pointless flash that has awesome animations.

Blackmagic responds:

My own voice was in it.
OH NOES YOUR LONG REVIEW HAS FRIED MY BRAIN!
I SEE I WAS WRONG TO MAKE A SHORT FUNNY THAT KIDS ON A WEBSITE WOULD BLAM BECAUSE IT HAD A CLOCK IN IT!!

And so forth.

Good

This flash showed a lot of style. The animations was great because it was a style rarly used and I like that animation the best. I do have something tosay about the voices though, you should get more people to do the vioces but let them do it in their voices and if they don't want to don it in their voices then make sure that they do an accent very good. I really didn't like some of those voices that was the only thing I didn't like and the missing tv. I wish you would have made it something else than a tv maybe a something of more value or something utterly usless like a toothbrush. But other than that It was very entertaining for me. I would like to see more of your work here on NG.

ayegowj responds:

Yeah, I like to change up my animation style on occasion. And I would rather not get other people involved in my horrible flash creations, but yeah, you're right. Thanks for the constructive criticism, and the encouragement. much appreciated.

Very Good

I love this series if it is a series but any ways I love what you are doing although you could work on a few things. The idea for this flash was intresting and some what original not many have done this idea but still has been done. The graphics I might say were good and was the sound. This is still very funny and entertaining it always passes the time. I would have to say work on you ideas and that wouls be it. I wish to see more of you work here on NG and keep up the new series.

beaton responds:

Wow, thanks a lot, man.

Awesome

Very very good although it was sticks you animated the stick very well. The music was a good chioces very up beat and went along with the scene. I would say make an actual flash or a movie out of it instead of just a clip but it wouldn't matter. The style of the animations although has been done before it was still pretty good. I would consider making a game or an story line flash that would really get you noticed. Try and get some ideas on a plot for a longer flash and chose different music this time and see how well it fits. One thing I had a problem with though the sticks and the backround was too small you need to enlarge the characters and the scenary. That would be all and I enjoyes watching your flaash and I hope to see more of your work here on NG.

Crazy

One thing you need to really work on is the drawings but I guess it's better than a stick figure. Alo the animations of the whole thing was good and so was the idea. I would like to see you submit more of your work here on NG keep it up.

Just work on the drawings and it will be awesome.

Good

I liked the idea even though I saw it on tv it was a good idea to make it as a flash. But the animations were good also the drawings of the characters were good. I would like to see you extend it more than him just shoot the guy, you should make it a little longer but other than that I liked this flash.

Needs work

Your flash needs just a little work, on your drawings. The animations was goos and was the storyline but it was just the drawings of the flash just good at all. Other than that I would hope to see moreflash/games from you and keep it up.

Just work on drawings next time, maybe get a friend to help you.

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