repenter's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Response 2]

Nice

This one was much better than your first episode. I liked the review itself and how you responded to it. You still need to work on the pause at the end of the review. I liked the humor you had in the review about the clip. I would like to see you make more resonse episodes to rag on more people.

[Leader of man]

Well....

Well it was just lacking something. The sound quality wasn't bad, but you could still hear some scratches in the mic. The character drawings were ok, but you still need to work on your robot drawing. The one thing you should do is make that one guys face brighter when he talks. You really need to put more into this I mean it was only talking all the way through even though some of it was funny it just isn't a kind of flash that most people want to watch.

[a response]

Good

Yes I can see how some people are simple minded enough to only want what the media tells them what they want. I thought the characters wee very well drawn although you could put a little more detail on the robot. The idea has been done before, but not like this. The sound quality was good, I liked the english voice. One thing I didn't like about this was the long pause after he has read the review, and the drawing of the blast from the cannon. I would try and work on that to get the full ten.

[White ep1]

Nice

Yes I really enjoyed this flash. Question though if this is episode one then why did he kill himself, I mean how is there going to be a chapter two? Ok the writing was very good although you took to long on it. The part about the mirror was very nice. I would really like to see you make more of these flashes they are aweseome.

Frogcloset responds:

it going to show the afterlife

[A Sad Swim.]

Needs work

Well the flash style that you were going for was great. But I would work in the circle drawing a little bit. The animations were pretty good I like what you did with the text of wind. The music choice wasn't bad, it fit the flash style. I would say it is too simple minded for some people on NG so.

[Crono's Party]

Nice

Anothr awesome Chrono sprite flash. I wish you would have put a picture on the text to let the people know who is talking. The stro-line was ok but not that good. I would like to see put more time into your work.

Yoshiking2 responds:

I started doing that in my previous submission but I couldn't do it in this movie because some of the Mugs(Pictures) I would have used was not here. so sry about that.
I didn't have 2 much time either. IT was a contest everything has a deal line.

[The morals of Clocktopia]

OK

Well a....ok this was just......aaaa ok stupid yeah I guess I could use that word. The animations were very good though, I liked what you did with the expression of the eye clock. The voice was dumb I don't know why you have to use that program. The flash was supposed tobe funny but I didn't get why it was supposed to be funny. I mean how is a ragging ona clock who hasn't done a something poo supposed to be funny?

TheDoctor responds:

Jesus just... Read your own last sentence! You might understant the hilarity then.
And they are clocks. To use different voices is blasphemy.