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[Shades of Grey Ep. 4]

Nice

I would like to see this series to keep going. What happened I havn't seen this in awhile. It was still good any way. Well one thing I don't like about it is that I can't give you anything to work on or any ideas. So be happy about that. The animations and character drawings are good. As the sound effects also the music was good but would have been my choice.

SirGaryColeman responds:

Thanks. And I'm guessing you meant to give me higher than a Zero, but messed up... oh well. :P

[...::: Kill Kenny :::...]

Decent

I have a big problem with this one. First off you didn't even animate kenny you just took clips from the show and pasted it here that isn't very good. Another thing was the odjects you used were poorly drawn and the blood doesn't floe that much on the show you added it and it doesn't even match the color as on the show. That's how I can tell it wa just clips because the poor drawings of the odjects and the blood. Other than that I would say it's good enough to be on the south park parody page.

Buzoniasty responds:

I didn't took clips from show i make it in flash with SP tutorial on NG!

[Paper Mario: Breakdance]

Awesome

I am a big fan of the paper mario I was waiting for someone to make a paper mario keep it up man. The animations are as good as you can get the if they are two dimension paper so I had to give you a ten on that. I love your choice in music I just had to watch five times just to listen to the music. The idea for a break dance contest must have been difficult due to the fact that they are paper I wonder how you even came up with that idea for it. This flash was just so funny seing a two dimension mario and bowser trying to break dance, but they were pretty good any way. I would like to see you make more paper marios flashes I would try make a game for paper mario. I would like to see what else you come up with for paper mario. One thing I must point out is the mushroom poster with dance atop his head. It's poorly drawn you need to just get a actual pic from mario and replacs it because it was just so messed up.

GrimJuju responds:

funny thing, i thaught about making a paper mario movie because there were none in the collections. (that i could find)

[KYROG3NiC]

Good

I havn't been a big fan of the stick slaughter but now I guess it's ok. But I have to say that it was stick death that started it all so you are basically 2nd rate stick flash makers. What I still don't like about these flashes from y'all is they're too random for me I mean have some structure make a flash that doesn't have just complete fighting throw a story line in there or something. That really just isn't proffesinal like that I mean if you want to have front page flashes you need to make the sticks bigger and make a flash with an actual purpose. But other than that your stuff is pretty good other that one thing, you really need o work on it. Well I would like to see some improvement from y'all and keep it up and I can't wait to see what y'all have next.

Sk1tz responds:

Meh, stick figure animations these days are pretty much always random, but I do agree. Except nobody want to see my cinematic stick. NOBODY :P.

[The Rabbitatrix:Chapter 1]

Nice

I liked this little flash it was very entertaining but a little too short. I really like the animations of the characters but not so much the drawings of some of them I would work on that. What I really like was the begining with the gun and sword were you drew it then it started the color that was very good. I would like to see what happens next. One more comment please your doing a parody of the martix so try and use proper grammer none of that pwn stuff. Well I thought it was good and I can't wait to see what happens next and keep it up.

OddRabbit responds:

thank you man! I appreciete it i worked really hard on it and your the first one to gimme a good review. I'll take ur comments serriously and it wasn't so much a porody, it was like a take off or sumthing i don't know what to call it. If you want to know what happens next I can tell you on AIM my sn is Senore Frylock

[Something Shines]

Good

I really liked this it had its owns style. But I think the drawings were a little too messed up, you see there is a line of a good drawing and a poor drawing but its still cool at the same time and I don't know how that works. Any way the animations of the flash was good and the idea was pretty good. Although I didn't get why he was in the desert I can't seem to think why you put him there I guess since he is prisoned. The ball on the chain thing was ok the sounde effect could have better suited the movment of the character but its was still ok. I would have liked the flash to be an adventure rather than a short but hey what can you do if you didn't make it. Any way I would like to see more of your work on NG and keep up the good work and please work on the drawing a little bit maybe get a friend to help you on that.

Dasneviano responds:

Thanks sir! Yeah, I'll work on the drawings and everything else. You're one of the people I'd like to watch my next movie, still unstarted. I think you'd understand it (most people here only care about video game and violence). I appreciate your words!
"nothing left except eternal darkness", indeed!!

[Koala Teaches]

Short

Firsr off I didn't like the fact that it was based on a clock flash. Also it was way to short and pointless next time make it a whole lot longer. The idea could have been good but the dumb crab thing just isn't it. Try a little harder on your ideas and thats it. The animations ws the only reason why I voted for its protection. The sound wasn't even from you or anyone that helped you make it, it was a clip and thats not very good. I would say do your own voices, but the sound effect of the projector and the screen was good that was the only sound bit that wasn't bad. Please next week isn't anal don't do that. I would like to see more of your work here as long as it isn't some kind of pointless flash that has awesome animations.

Blackmagic responds:

My own voice was in it.
OH NOES YOUR LONG REVIEW HAS FRIED MY BRAIN!
I SEE I WAS WRONG TO MAKE A SHORT FUNNY THAT KIDS ON A WEBSITE WOULD BLAM BECAUSE IT HAD A CLOCK IN IT!!

And so forth.