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[Rushing Stars]

Not bad

First it was a great idea for a flash nice job. Not my favorite of your work you have yet to match your past work. Some things that I would like to talk to you about first off is your character drawings. They're really lacking I know drawings on a flash is harder than on a piece of paper, but there isn't much you can do unless you want to buy all this hardware, but enough about that I'm getting off track here. Some of the things could have been drawn better like the drill, and the high speed event when he was flying through space. Other than that I think it was a clever idea. One thing that doesn't fit well with reality, well first you could never turn earth into a car, but when the earth dodged a meteor a car rose up then crashed back down and blew up. Now that would never happen do to the a thing I like to call "gravity", but it's your flash not mine so. It basically is what would happen if the world was going to end people would start to get scared and there would be an old guy holding a sigh say "repent" hey my names repent nice. I lost my thought so I'm going to wrap this up with a thumbs up and can't wait to see what else you got for me to enjoy.

[Sober]

Very Good

Well I must say one of the best Music Videos I've seen in awhile. I really did like your timing in the song and along with some other things, and of coures there is always somewhere you messed up on. First off your animation were terrific prima I must say. The only thing I think you need to work on and I think you see it too when you show the world and cracks forming or something like that. As the world turned the ctacks stayed in one place so you need to check that out and fix that little bit. Sound was not bad you could have used just a tiny bit a misc sound little sound affects that went along with the song as a rythme or something. Good song choice I wish you would do more of these music videos they're very good. Now your character movment had a few flaws like when he was pulling down the lever you messed up there his hand was kind of missplaced on the bar. The guitar placment with the hands still a bit off really I don't know how you can play guitar with only three fingers, but ok you just need to move the wrist up a bit you had it looking like he had his wrist broken because really guitar players don't normally put their wrist that for unless they need to do certain chords, but most of them. Well I think you could do better and I hope you do and I would like to see more of your work and it will be a pleaser reviewing it. I hope to see another Insomnia Music Video.

[MK vs. SF 2]

Nice

Not bad a little bit better than one, but all in all very good. I forgot this in the last review you really need to slow down the dialoge box please I can't read what your text. A little disapointing at the end that was kind fo wierd to end it like that I would suggest you ended it like that. Now I would suggest you add something else after Scorpion dies not just them shaking hands cause I don't even know who that guy was so it was kind of a wierd thing for me and some other people who don't know who he is. Now I don't know if I asked in the last review, but that in the hell are those little dots that fly everywhere when someone makes conteact? Is that from SF? Also another quesiton where did you get those sprites? I've found SF, but not many MK sprite sheets.
Animation: Well to start off your animation of the characters and your extras was excellent I have know problem with that. You didn't go as accessive with the slowmo thank you I was kind of annoyed with it on the last one. If you can rip sprites than I suggest a newer version of MK it would be a little bit better in quality for both character fighting together just a suggestion.
Style: I still think it is still original and I would like to offer my services if you need some help. I would like to see you go somewhere else with the SF vs. MK try different characters not the main guy for SF try Blanka or something like that. I would like to see a SF vs MK tornment if you could do that. Have basicaly matches between SF and MK to face each other and to have their realm safe or something like that have them fight for their realm. I would like to see you use SF backround next time the guys look kind fo wierd fighting in those areas for some reaso to me. Sound: I felt that your music fit in each scenes very well done. Your cobat sound bits fit and on que so really not much to do on sound. Well I would like to know where you get the combat bits.
As I said I'll be willing to help if needed just ask. I really behoove you to slow down the dialoge boxes so people can read them in time. I can't wait to see your next submission and I'll be happy to review it.

[MK vs. SF]

Very good

Well I got to say man this is one of the best inter-game face offs that I've seen. Although not perfect still an awesome game for the most part. You could have made just a bit longer by keeping the six arm guy, but hey it's still an awesome flash even without it. I'm into sprites maybe I can help you out a bit or maybe supply you with some sprites for any different ideas of inter-games flashes.
Very different choice of characters though most people would have chosen scorpion or zero I comend you for choosing someone that really isn't a favorite although he is my favorite.
Your animations was very good I didn't see any sloppyness in and of the part except when you went in slow mo. A little advice is not to slow down every five seconds. You just need them to be fighting, but then some times you did need to go slow. Like what you did at the end when they both went in the air and he kicked him into the blast that is one thing you would need to go slow for another thing is when they dodge the blasts that is also needed, but the other things not so much I mean if you really wanted to you could but not as accessive. Other than that I would say your animation was very outstanding. I would like to see you do more than just fight scenes anyone can do fight scenes how about you do something in between you know like why the fight starts. Well like I said I would love to help you out in any way that I can and I can't wait to review MK vs. SF2.

[Super Mario Tribute!!]

OMG

OMGOMGOMG. Well to be serious it was a very good flash. The animation was top nocht sound was great. You were very mean to tace sprite though and I am a shemed of you. Is bloo's Mario Red game basicaly the third to the last pipe? It looks almost the same just a higher quality sprite and buttons? Well really there isn't much to review on this since it was so dam funnnnnnnyyyieiieieieiey Well I can't wait for the next mario tribute or a megaman tribute or metal slug or any other tribute that yall think of.

JordanKinsley responds:

Thanks for the Review this is the best review yet! thanks for reviewing!

[Sprite Crew Tournament]

Nice

Well I got to give you props this is pretty good man. Although the line-up of fighters could have been better. How did tace sprite lose??????????????????????He never loses jk. Well the ending could have been better for example for the final move for k-up sprite you could have had a super blast like have him un-screw his cap and blast all over bloo sprite. I think it's kinda mean what you did to darkness sprite. I would like to see another Sprite Club Tornament 2 so I can be in it or animate it either one is fine with me.

[Great Yoshi Migration 6]

Good

Well it was a good way to end it you just didn't get the whole potential out of it. It didn't make sense why mario killed those mean ass yoshies for hanging him. The whole was a great idea not many people know that there are a lot of things that don't make sense in the begining like Tale of Two Cities you wonder why this person hates this guy, but at the end you go oh so that's why. You people really need to pay attention not every makes sense or has a purpose. Speaking of that why did you have a yoshi rex? I didn't see that play into something. The sound and animations was as the same. Still too short for an ending, but what an ending it was. WOOT.

[Great Yoshi Migration 5]

Um...

Not really a Yoshi Migration chapter when there is no yoshis in the flash you could have shown a yoshi come up to luigie. Still very very short I really don't get why you had koopa guys in the flash and the mushroom king. You really need to think a little more before you submit anything.

[Great Yoshi Migration 4]

Better

Nice I liked this one it was funny, but still short. The scene with mario was great. I got to ask you what is with yoshi he has his eyes crossed did you do that or is that how yoshi is? Well the only thing I found bad about this is you have migration five and six how can you have two more if all the yoshies are dead. But then I only saw two yoshies die not three.

[Great Yoshi Migration 3]

Better than the last

Well it is beter and made more sense than the last chapter. Ok so only three more yoshies left alright here comes the climax. The sound animations all the same blah blah. You have no interesting flashes think of something good.
And a little tip for you other people who are review the yoshie migration read the caption at the end you dumb asses it says aonly three yoshies are left not all of them died.