Please
Please Please put your story into an animation flash. I really like the idea for it it's just that it isn't an actual flash. I still like the music. What I have read so far is very interesting if you could email me your whole story I would like that. Because I don't think that your work will get passed any more.
Why
Why do you just eneter your story instead of an animations?
You should make your story into a flash. It's good story I'll tell you that I would like to see what else you got. Just make it in motion next time. Good choice in music it's very wierd I've never heard it before.
Nice
I can't give you a ten just yet due to the fact that it hasn't hit the climax. The animations are about the same if not better. The character drawings have improved a little but still lacking somthing. Awesome series I will review the rest and I would hope to see you make another series of some kind. I like you ideas for the flashes and I would like to see you continue this. Try and use an actual full body figure it might get you a ten faster.
Not Bad
I would say it needs a little work but not much. The character drawings also the objects drawings could use a little work. The animations of the characters are pretty good. I have already seen thi series I just never reviewed it so I'm going to review your work right now.
Good
This was a great little flash. The animations of the characters and flying odjects were good. Work on the character drawings a little bit make them an actual whole body instead of a stick. The idea was good but you didn't put enough. You need to make this longer instead of cutting them off into two parts.
Why
Why did you cut this short? Your character drawings are slacking you really need to work on them. The animations is the same very good. The sound quality of the guys voice was ok. The accent could be better. The contrast you need to work on it's too dark at some points of your flashes for me to see anything.
...original document was a .AVI file or .WMV, originaly 11 minutes long, Email me and i send you the 90 mb . wmv file. or AIM me up.
that is why.
Nice
This has a little bit more structure than your others but still lacks a little. You really need to work on your pre-loader. And if you are going to do a scene selestion thing why not make a title page instead of making a scene selection page. Like have the title page and have links to the credits to your web stuff like that. The animations were great as was the character drawings. The voices were ok but not as good as I think they should be.
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Much Better
I like this version better due to the the sound. I think you should work a little bit on your sound effects you got the voices mastered now you just have to get the sound effects in your work. Everything else is the same but I think this hits more to homebase because of the sound. When you have to read it takes away a part of the message.
yes
Nice Work
This had a whole lot better animations than your other work that I've seen. I see what your views are about smoking and I feel the same way about it. Too short for me I would say stretch it out a bit. Very good sound quality on your voices keep that up. I would like to see you submit more just make them longer than this one. Also you need to work on your pre-loaders, they are kind of sloppy.
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Good
A very good idea on your opion of smoking. Although kind of short it still sends a message. The animations was pretty good. The character drawings were good also. The music choice I'm not to sure about. You couls have done a different song than that one. Well not one of your better flashes but you still have a more powerfull message than others.
this was boring.
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