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[FFVI:DarknessFallsEp.2]

Nice again

Well well well we meet again.
I got to say this one is better than I expected. The music fit the scene. The animations was good, but very daring how the wolf came at the screen an splattered blood. I really enjoyed the moogle rally very funny to see all those little things. You cut it kinda short, but that makes for a longer series ^.^

I enjoyed it and can't wait to see the next one. I need an idea for a flash and I can't think of anything. You know my aim so just give me an idea and I'll work with it.

[Sprite Wrestling Fed. 02]

Nice

I liked the idea I think I'm going to do the same thing. You got to tell me where you got the ring please man I can't find one.

[101 Ways To Fall #1]

A for effort

You had a good idea for a series, but somewhere you fouled.
Your animations and character concept needs work. The room were the old guy was in could have been way more detailed that means more things in the room like floor paneling something like that. What was with the monopoly guy? That was not needed. There was no point in him falling out the window. You could have gotten him to drop something or something to make him look out the window, like a girl beding over that's always a crowd pleaser. Don't just have him fall out the window for no reason you're cheating yourself.
I hope to see you improve on your ideas and think it out and make it funny there was no point to this one.

[Nature]

Too short

This seems shorter than the clock flash. One thing I didn't like was the butterfly not colered. But everything else was ok. I still think something with that kind of message deserves a longer flash. I would like to see you continue with your flash making and hopfully get better at it and make an awesome flash.

drDAK responds:

The focus of the butterfly was not to be colored, so it stuck out.

[Colonel Clock]

???

Dak what's wrong? That animations was way off. And a bit short for a clock flash. I hope you don't make another clock flash.

drDAK responds:

Twas terrible, mind you, I hated that flash.

[Me Talking to Myself]

Very Nice

I liked this a lot it had a lot of meaning to it. The animations was fair. I like the aproach you went for on the drawings styles, but I don't feel you achieved it on the characters I don't know, but there was something missing. Well anyway the plot was very good althought doesn't fit the title very good and powerful.
Where is that Rushing Star you were talking about? I can't wait.
I hope to see you continue your flash making and I can't wait to review them.

Dasneviano responds:

Eeeeee! Thanks a lot!! Even though this is my flash that more people liked and said good thigs about, and bookmarked and everything, I haven't been able to watch it again since the day I uploaded it! I know what you mean when you said I didn't achieve it, i feel it too.
Rushing Stars is like 90% done!! Should be ready by he end of next month!! :D

[FF:The New Empire Part 3]

A bit different

Well it isn't like you other flashes. I didn't like what you did with the dialoge box, I like them strechted across the top not boxed, it make it looks wierd. Animations is about the same a bit daring on the close up, but hey there isn't much you can do with sprites on close ups. Music is fine. One thing I really didn't like was the fight scene where you did everything seperate to were to had to click on them to see the fight. Next time just have a skip button.

Tootbook responds:

alrighty! thanks repent :p.

[Round Vegetables]

Simple

A very simple flash I like that. I liked the character drawing in this one, I also loved what you did with the border althought it could be a bit bigger. The animations was good not sure in music choice I mean it was funny red neck music, but a bit too red necky if you know what I mean too nuch banjo in it. I would like to see you create more works of art, so when is your next piece comming out? If you ever need a script writer be sure to give me an email on what you need. Till next time I give you thanks and best of luck on your next piece of work. Thank You

Dasneviano responds:

Wow!! Thanks a lot for the sweet words, they really mean a lot to me!!My next piece is coming out soon, it's called rushing stars and is almost finished! Ill send u an email to make sure you dont miss it!! The more publicity it gets...
Thanks a lot one more time and keep boosting other people self steem!!

[Rookie tv1]

Good

Well I thought it was very interesting that you used a black person for this kind of sittuation usually it's a white guy who gets caught up in that situation. Style of animations I liky very much very good, one thing I thought you tried to make funny but wasn't was those Mc fries the cup with the m poorly drawn. The sound audio was above average nothing new, but all in all a good flash. Just work on your idea a bit more.

I would like to see more of this style animations from you on NG I give you a 4/5 for effort well till next time man, good lucj with your next piece.

[Transformers: S T I D]

Needs work

Well it needs some work and a little more detail. You need to take mug shot of the character and put it with the dialogw when they are speaking. Work on your character drawings a little bit, and please try and make it longer. Not bad though not bad just work on it a little more. Lay it out and have someone check it.

amit-patel responds:

i had my mates check it. maybe i just have a different sense of humor.

thanx anyway!